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He thrust out his lead leg and energetically vaulted over the hurdle. The resistance from the water made the 110 metre hurdles tricky (much more difficult than on land!), yet the athlete was responding well to the added challenge and pressure. After all, this was the first Olympic Games to be held under the sea…I went to the home and I had some food and I walk to the race and I wow and it was cool and I went to the shop and I went to the tree house and I walk home and. I went to bed and I woke up and I had some food and I ran to the race and I wow and I was so so so happy and I went to the school and I walk home I stayed home I and it bed and I went to the race and I wow agan I was so so happy and I went .Home had some food and I went to the shop and I walk home and also I got a cat and I name it rouby and she was so so cute also I was so happy I went to the race and rouby and I wow and I went to the dog park and I went home and I went to bed and I had some food and I went to and I went to time zone I and I went to the race and I wow andand my rose is my mum and she was mad I ran and rousey and I went to my home and I went to bed and I went the shop and I went home and.I went to my old house and I went to the old shop and I went to the old house and I went to bed and I went to my old house it took me 5 hour and I went to my tree house and I went to mt bed and I went to get some food and I went to sleepy and I walk to the shop and I went to my home went to bed I woke up and I had and I went to the the rasc and I wow and got .Same food and I went home ruby was gone I wento the shop she was not there and I went to the end
Kia ora Savannah.
ReplyDeleteYou have some really good ideas.I did notice that there were a couple of places were you repeated what you did.
Maybe next time you could re-read your work each time you write a sentence to make sure it's different to the previous one.
Did you find it hard running under water wearing flippers?.I think it would of been easier running in bare feet.
Kia Ora Savannah.
ReplyDeleteI hope you and your whanau are keeping safe during this extended break from school.
Hopefully we will be back there soon.
Take care and keep safe.
Morena Savannah.
ReplyDeleteThe sun is shining and it's a beautiful day.
I can't wait to see what you have been doing this break from school.
Take care,enjoy the sunshine and stay safe.
Have a great weekend Savannah.Take care and keep safe.
ReplyDeleteJust wishing you a safe and happy week Savannah.I hope all is well with you and your whanau.
ReplyDeleteTake care and keep warm.It's quite cold outside :)
Have a wonderful week Savannah.:)
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Savannah.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to seeing what you have been doing over the past few weeks.
I am looking forward to catching up with you once school starts back Savannah.I hope all is going well.
ReplyDeleteWAHOO! SCHOOL IS OPEN TOMORROW-see you then Savannah.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to reading your next post Savannah.
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful week.