Story starter!
He arrived at the surface of the water and took a refreshing breath of air. Whilst keeping his body completely still, he glanced around the swamp with large, circular, green eyes.
After several moments, he slipped his enormous body beneath the surface of the water once again, and slithered off in search of food…and I ran away
And it was scary and I saw a house and I went in it and it was food. I ate it and it was raining. I also went home and saw a tree house.And I went in it and it was so cool,I stay and I went to sleepy and I went to get same food
Also it was a shop.And I got some shoes and I went to the scary
house and I was a pet fish and also a shack and I kill it and I went to bed and I had some food to eat and I went in the tree house and I went to to get a book and I went home to the.Tree house.And I saw my mum also dad and thay was
mad and I ran away and thay ran to I went to the scary house also I ran and ran to the school and it was so so scary and I stad
And I ran to the tree house and I had food and I went to sleepy and I had food and I ran to the shop.And I got same food and I went to the tree house and I had same food and I went to the school also I ran home and I saw mum and dad
And it was raining and I went to the tree house.Also I went to bed and I ran to school and I went home but I went to the shop and I’m eating my food and I went for a swim I went home to the tree house and I went to sleep and I went to the school I saw animals and I kill it and I love my tree house and I and I went to the scholl and I went to the shop
And I we home and I had same a food and the end
You've got lots of great ideas Savannah.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described what ever was in the water.I got a picture in my head of an alligator.But then it might of been a monster I have never seen before.
What did your tree house look like?.
I hope you are having a lovely day with your whanau.Take care.